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English 0950 Project
Drafting:the Collage or Web Page
Main Assignment | Plan
for Completing this Project | Process Memo
| Project Requirements | Additional
Readings
Goals:
1. Use a "discovery" map with branches based
on the modes of development to explore various
aspects of a topic and then come to some conclusion about it.
2. Increase awareness of the effects of organization and transitions
in an essay by using a "planning" map to create
a collage or Web page that is focused but deliberately fragmented or randomly
ordered.
3. Establish focus in your collage or Web page with a creative title
and an effective opening. Direct your writing to a target audience that
does not know you personally and is less informed about your topic than
you are.
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Main Assignment
Use the rhetorical modes for paragraph development
to explore a topic in a "discovery" map. Draft
one or more paragraphs for each branch on your map. With these paragraphs
as "raw material," create a collage or Web page in which the branches are
linked and can be read in random order. Give your piece focus by adding
a creative title and an effective opening; however, your collage or Web
page will lack a strong pattern of organization. A collage will have some
kind of space or dividers to mark the breaks between sections. A Web page
will have hyperlinks instead of transitions. A sample student collage and
web pages are listed in the additional readings
for this project.
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Plan for Completing this Project
Step 1. Discovery
Begin in Discovery Grove. Choose a topic.
· Is there a topic you've been assigned in another class? Can
you use this project as an opportunity to write about that topic?
· Are there topics in your discovery writing that you have not
yet used in this class? Can you choose one of those topics?
· If you are still blank, try using the prompt for discovering
a topic in Discovery Grove or go to Planning
and try browsing for a little while.
· If you need to, review "Blasting
through Writer's Block."
Step 2. Planning
Create a planning map of your topic using
the rhetorical modes for developing paragraphs as the branches on your
map.

Collage: write a paragraph for each of the branches on your
map. Arrange these segments in an order or layout that creates the overall
effect you want. Then add:
· a creative title,
· an introduction,
· collage dividers (by placing extra space or inserting a line
or graphic between the segments of your collage),
· a closing segment for the collage or a final link back to
the beginning of your homepage.
Web page: write a paragraph for each of the branches on your map.
Then create a homepage with a creative title and an introduction to your
Web page. On your homepage, create links to each of your paragraphs. At
the end of each of your paragraphs, place a link back to your homepage
or back to the top of your page You may also want to include a list of
your favorite links to other sites on the Web. For more information about
the style of Web pages, you may want to go to a Web
page style guide. To publish your Web page on the Internet, you can
do any one of the following:
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Open your own Web page account at www.geocities.com
or www.hotmail.com
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Set up your homepage with your Internet provider. Many providers offer
Web page space as part of their service.
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Or you can work with me to publish your Web page here at our class site
at the Writers' PLACE. If you want to do this, you will have to save your
Web page folder on a disk and send your disk to me.
Share your collage or Web page with your group. Do they have any suggestions
for expanding the branches, strengthening the focus, improving links or
enhancing the visual impact of the page?
Step 5. Revision
Use the feedback from your group to revise your collage or Web page.
Share your revised draft with them and ask them to help you edit and proofread
your final draft.
Step 6. Proceess Memo
Process Memo
Write a one-page memo in which you analyze each of the following elements
in your Web page:
1. Purpose: what is the purpose of your collage or Web page? What is
your topic? What is the main assertion you want to make about this topic?
How do you want to affect your target audience?
2. Language: what language choices did you make to accomplish your purpose
with your audience? What tone do you want here? How did your purpose and
audience influence your diction (word choices) and sentence structure?
What was your thinking as you laid out your collage or Web page? What concerns
did you have about graphics and visual impact?
3. Audience: who is your target audience? What do they already know
about your topic? What new information do you have to share? Why should
they care about this topic? Are the members of your writing group part
of your target audience? If not, how are they different? How did they respond
to your collage or Web page?
4. Context: how did the fact that this is a collage or Web page change
the way you approached the assignment? How is writing a Web page different
from writing a personal narrative or an expository essay?
5. Evidence: how did you use the modes of development to expand your
discussion on the topic? How does your title help establish the focus of
your collage or Web page? How did your awareness of audience affect your
choice of details to include?
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Project Requirements
To receive credit for this project, you should include the following in
your folder:
___ your discovery or planning map
___ your planning notes and discovery drafts
___ a print copy of your collage or Web page
___ [optional] a disk copy or Internet copy of your Web page
___ your process memo
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Readings
Dorough, Donna K. and James A. Rye.
"Mapping for Understanding:Using Concept Maps as Windows to Students' Minds."
The
Science
Teacher 64 (Jan 1997): 36.
Elbow, Peter and Pat Belanoff.
"Loop Writing."A Community of Writers. New York: McGRaw-Hill, Inc.
1995, 66-97.
Forrest, Holly.
"Cirrhosis of the Liver: My Life." Sample Student
Paper.
Students' Web Pages
Ellen Daly. http://www.writers-place.com/daly/homepage.html
Herman Haayer. Cookin' with Herm
Joni Jensen. http://members.theglobe.com/rosierjay/default.html
John Kocon. <http://www.writers-place.com/kocon/homepage.htm
Josh Olson. http://www.angelfire.com/mn/lexus21/index.html
Trevor Swanson. <http://www.writers-place.com/swanson/homepage.htm
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