English 0950 Project
Drafting:the Collage or Web Page

Main Assignment | Plan for Completing this Project | Process Memo | Project Requirements | Additional Readings


Goals:

1. Use a "discovery" map with branches based on the modes of development to explore various aspects of a topic and then come to some conclusion about it.
2. Increase awareness of the effects of organization and transitions in an essay by using a "planning" map to create a collage or Web page that is focused but deliberately fragmented or randomly ordered.
3. Establish focus in your collage or Web page with a creative title and an effective opening. Direct your writing to a target audience that does not know you personally and is less informed about your topic than you are.

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Main Assignment

Use the rhetorical modes for paragraph development to explore a topic in a "discovery" map. Draft one or more paragraphs for each branch on your map. With these paragraphs as "raw material," create a collage or Web page in which the branches are linked and can be read in random order. Give your piece focus by adding a creative title and an effective opening; however, your collage or Web page will lack a strong pattern of organization. A collage will have some kind of space or dividers to mark the breaks between sections. A Web page will have hyperlinks instead of transitions. A sample student collage and web pages are listed in the additional readings for this project.

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Plan for Completing this Project

Step 1. Discovery

    Begin in Discovery Grove. Choose a topic.
      · Is there a topic you've been assigned in another class? Can you use this project as an opportunity to write about that topic?
      · Are there topics in your discovery writing that you have not yet used in this class? Can you choose one of those topics?
      · If you are still blank, try using the prompt for discovering a topic in Discovery Grove or go to Planning and try browsing for a little while.
      · If you need to, review "Blasting through Writer's Block."

Step 2. Planning

    Create a planning map of your topic using the rhetorical modes for developing paragraphs as the branches on your map.

Step 3. Drafting

    Collage: write a paragraph for each of the branches on your map. Arrange these segments in an order or layout that creates the overall effect you want. Then add:
      · a creative title,
      · an introduction,
      · collage dividers (by placing extra space or inserting a line or graphic between the segments of your collage),
      · a closing segment for the collage or a final link back to the beginning of your homepage.
    Web page: write a paragraph for each of the branches on your map. Then create a homepage with a creative title and an introduction to your Web page. On your homepage, create links to each of your paragraphs. At the end of each of your paragraphs, place a link back to your homepage or back to the top of your page You may also want to include a list of your favorite links to other sites on the Web. For more information about the style of Web pages, you may want to go to a Web page style guide. To publish your Web page on the Internet, you can do any one of the following:
    • Open your own Web page account at www.geocities.com or www.hotmail.com
    • Set up your homepage with your Internet provider. Many providers offer Web page space as part of their service.
    • Or you can work with me to publish your Web page here at our class site at the Writers' PLACE. If you want to do this, you will have to save your Web page folder on a disk and send your disk to me.

Step 4. Collaboration

    Share your collage or Web page with your group. Do they have any suggestions for expanding the branches, strengthening the focus, improving links or enhancing the visual impact of the page?

Step 5. Revision

    Use the feedback from your group to revise your collage or Web page. Share your revised draft with them and ask them to help you edit and proofread your final draft.

Step 6. Proceess Memo


Process Memo

Write a one-page memo in which you analyze each of the following elements in your Web page:
    1. Purpose: what is the purpose of your collage or Web page? What is your topic? What is the main assertion you want to make about this topic? How do you want to affect your target audience?

    2. Language: what language choices did you make to accomplish your purpose with your audience? What tone do you want here? How did your purpose and audience influence your diction (word choices) and sentence structure? What was your thinking as you laid out your collage or Web page? What concerns did you have about graphics and visual impact?

    3. Audience: who is your target audience? What do they already know about your topic? What new information do you have to share? Why should they care about this topic? Are the members of your writing group part of your target audience? If not, how are they different? How did they respond to your collage or Web page?

    4. Context: how did the fact that this is a collage or Web page change the way you approached the assignment? How is writing a Web page different from writing a personal narrative or an expository essay?

    5. Evidence: how did you use the modes of development to expand your discussion on the topic? How does your title help establish the focus of your collage or Web page? How did your awareness of audience affect your choice of details to include?

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Project Requirements

To receive credit for this project, you should include the following in your folder:

___ your discovery or planning map
___ your planning notes and discovery drafts
___ a print copy of your collage or Web page
___ [optional] a disk copy or Internet copy of your Web page
___ your process memo

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Readings

Dorough, Donna K. and James A. Rye.
"Mapping for Understanding:Using Concept Maps as Windows to Students' Minds." The Science Teacher 64 (Jan 1997): 36.
Elbow, Peter and Pat Belanoff.
"Loop Writing."A Community of Writers. New York: McGRaw-Hill, Inc. 1995, 66-97.
Forrest, Holly.
"Cirrhosis of the Liver: My Life." Sample Student Paper.

Students' Web Pages

Ellen Daly. http://www.writers-place.com/daly/homepage.html
Herman Haayer. Cookin' with Herm
Joni Jensen. http://members.theglobe.com/rosierjay/default.html
John Kocon. <http://www.writers-place.com/kocon/homepage.htm
Josh Olson. http://www.angelfire.com/mn/lexus21/index.html
Trevor Swanson. <http://www.writers-place.com/swanson/homepage.htm

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